Accuracy: Aim for a more accurate shape. Start by sketching lightly and then improve the overall shape before adding a range of values.
Edges: Try not to give your drawing a dark outline. Sketch lightly and shade away from the edges.
More Detail: This is a good start but it needs more detail. Remember to look really carefully and add all the detail you can see, including textures.
Smooth Shading: Aim for smoother shading. Use a blunter pencil (not sharp), pressing lightly to smoothly build up the tone.
Include range of values: This looks a little faint. Don’t be afraid to include a range of values or tones (lights to darks).
Enlarge: This has great potential but it is too small. You will find it easier to add detail if you work larger.
Eliminate smudges: This has good qualities but looks a little smudged. Rest you hand on a piece of paper while you work to avoid smudging. Erase any extra smudges before you hand in your work.
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